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Treachery
 

In a world after Earth and Humans, the Nintaliese are the master race; descendants of the now dead galaxy.

A terrible event caused a division in the race separating them into the Yang and Yin, straight down to their blood.

Now, 200 years later, their timid peace seems like a fool's illusion. An endless war is never so easily tamed. Even if rest is obtained, a child born of the mingled divisioned race must suffer the curse of Fate's Tear.

With the race severed between good and evil, what Fate awaits the one who is torn in between?

   

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---"It's an amazingly interesting comic. ^^ It starts out really typical, the world is ending and mankind is leaving the scene. Distinct good and evil, protagonists and villians. That's all in the prologue. THEN chapter 1 comes and suddenly things become very entertaining because it stops being old hat and starts being very new and interesting, as it entirely skips the battle between good and evil and goes right into the shakey peace between the two and how it's maintained. It's very much original after the prologue, with a well thought out ... SPORT. Of all things. O_o" ~Blix of ASPS

---"Its amazing how complex [firecloud's] story is, while being simple at the same time....where new things keep poping up with more history to it. Its like [firecloud is] giving us pieces of a puzzle a little at a time...but some times these pieces aren't back to back but competely seperate and I wonder how it all fits." ~Jaclyn T.

   

FT Officially debued on April 18th, 2005


Rated OT+
(Older Teen, ages 16+)

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